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The Torn One
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The Torn One

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PostSubject: Working through emotions   Working through emotions Icon_minitimeMon May 14, 2007 10:51 am


Some people work through their emotions by making music.
Some of them electric, Some of them acoustic.
A small group works through it by hurting themselves, cutting in their body.
Some people drown their emotions by drinking alcohol from the brewery.
Some person express it by nudity.
But I express my emotions by poetrie.
Some people think that Iím good.
I donít care about that, Iím not in the right mood.
Not everyone has all emotions, most people just have some.
But every obstacle can be overcome.
So if anything goes wrong.
Donít be down for too long.
Try to calm yourself, write a poem, Shout or sing a song.
Or do something else that calms you.
Take a piss or a dump, Sometimes that helps too.
Or think of a happy valley.
Everything will get better eventually.
Remember! : ďTo get to the top, U will have to start at the bottomĒ.
And I know some more wise things but I forgot Ďem
Hope u like it Enjoy reading
And rate plz ..
Greetz TTO
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mezitiguy

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PostSubject: Re: Working through emotions   Working through emotions Icon_minitimeMon May 14, 2007 2:52 pm

my opinion about this poem is :

This poem is EMO!

like dude, you think that this helps you or something??

no it doesn't you wil be remembered to it for ever..

writing down is one, reading every day is second.....



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PostSubject: Re: Working through emotions   Working through emotions Icon_minitimeMon May 14, 2007 3:36 pm

xD but expressing is better than putting it away ..
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Camille

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PostSubject: Re: Working through emotions   Working through emotions Icon_minitimeMon May 14, 2007 4:41 pm

I don't like the beginning, but when you start talking about your own way of expressing it's good. I especially like the last sentence, that's briljant Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Working through emotions   Working through emotions Icon_minitimeMon May 14, 2007 5:55 pm

xD Thx ..
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PostSubject: Re: Working through emotions   Working through emotions Icon_minitimeMon May 14, 2007 9:10 pm

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Some people work through their emotions by making music.
Some of them electric, Some of them acoustic.
A small group works through it by hurting themselves, cutting in their body.
Some people drown their emotions by drinking alcohol from the brewery.
Some person express it by nudity.

Personally I don't think that part brings anything to your poem..more as takes away from it. Though i do find the rest of your poem does catch me. Especially the last line. Well done Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Working through emotions   Working through emotions Icon_minitimeMon May 14, 2007 11:01 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Working through emotions   Working through emotions Icon_minitimeFri May 18, 2007 5:25 pm

ik weet niet wat ik met deze heb maar vind deze gwoon helemaal geweldig...
zie er het nut wel van in jah:P
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